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Dark Planet

The world is bleak,
Unkind
Unforgiving
There is no light
Shining on this planet
It is all so unbearable
Unthinkable
Unimaginable
Loneliness fills the soul
Breaking it into a thousand pieces
Love is unobtainable
Unacceptable
No light to break
This curtain of darkness
Life dredges on
Unaware
Unassuming
Undying.
©2002-2009 ~magickpixie
:iconmagickpixie:

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A Poem I wrote at midnight about, well, just how dark the planet can seem and how dreadful and can all get.

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No matter how dark things may get, try to keep the flame of Hope alive in you. A really good poem, tho. Great job! I'm adding to to my favs, 'cause I really like it!

~.oO Water Elemental Oo.~

--
Life is too short to suffocate, too long to be held breathless.
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This is beautiful. Don't worry, the day will come sometime soon! :-) (Smile) You just have to wait for it. Lovely piece, though.

-- peace easy

--
say what you will; say what you mean.
you could never offend;
your dirty words come out clean.

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